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Post by Admin on Dec 5, 2015 21:19:05 GMT
Hi Vishwa Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and the human experience, whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Lovely essay. Easily a 7.0-7.5.  www.ieltsexchange.com |
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Post by Admin on Dec 5, 2015 21:36:34 GMT
How important is dress code in our lives?
Do you consider that dressing appropriately is important or are you of the opinion that everyone should be able to wear exactly what they like? Another great essay! www.ieltsexchange.com
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Post by vinutna on Dec 6, 2015 5:53:54 GMT
Hello Teacher Jill,
Thanks for evaluation and I will soon post another essay and letter.
Vishwa
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Post by Admin on Dec 6, 2015 6:07:29 GMT
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Post by vinutna on Dec 6, 2015 15:01:10 GMT
Hello Teacher Jill, here is an essay below, kindly correct it and give the feed back. Some families have opted to teach their children at home. Why do you think this is? In your opinion, do you think that all children should be taught in a school environment? Say why you think home schooling would not be a good idea and also point out some benefits for this chosen form of education.   |
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Post by vinutna on Dec 6, 2015 15:02:43 GMT
You recently traveled on a train which arrived very late causing you to miss an appointment. Write a letter to the train company. In your letter Explain what caused the delay in the journey Tell them what happened because of the delay Ask them for a refund.  |
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Post by Admin on Dec 7, 2015 6:02:17 GMT
Hi Vishwa  You have some good ideas in your letter and it is well structured, but there are quite a few minor errors in word choice and articles which may reduce this to a 6.5. The essay is good. It is well-argued with a range of grammatical structures and some good vocabulary. I like the example about the survey. This would be 7 as they are only a few errors.  Kind regards Teacher Jill www.ieltsexchange.com |
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Post by vinutna on Dec 7, 2015 14:50:54 GMT
Hello, Essay Nowadays more and more older people compete with younger people for the same job. What can be the reason for this? What would you suggest as a solution.   |
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Post by Admin on Dec 7, 2015 20:32:57 GMT
Hi Vishwa I like the reference to Luddites! You could have mentioned things like a shrinking economy means fewer jobs so old and young are in competition, or that people are living longer, so old retirement points are behind the times. For example when a man was supposed to live for 'three score years and ten' (until 70), retiring at 60 or 65 seemed reasonable. As life expectancy has risen, so has the need for people to work later in life. You didn't give any hard examples this time, and the arguments were less clear. This is probably a 6.5, although you have a range of structures and good vocabulary. Watch those articles! Nowadays more and more older people compete with younger people for the same job. What can be the reason for this? What would you suggest as a solution.Read more: ieltsexchange.freeforums.net/post/new/127#ixzz3tfWhwx4U Kind regards Teacher Jill www.ieltsexchange.com |
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Post by vinutna on Dec 8, 2015 16:54:27 GMT
Hello Teacher Jill, Writing Task 2 (an essay) Some people believe that history is very important and we must study the past to understand the present. Others say that it has little or no use at all. Discuss both views, give your opinion and support it with examples.   |
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Post by Admin on Dec 8, 2015 19:40:27 GMT
Hi Vishwa  Lovely! 7.0 Still some little errors in word choice, but a really good essay. Kind regards Teacher Jill www.ieltsexchange.com |
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Post by vinutna on Dec 9, 2015 14:09:34 GMT
Hello, Newspapers have a huge influence on people's ideas and opinions. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative trend?   |
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Post by Admin on Dec 9, 2015 22:20:13 GMT
Hi Vishwa Good essay. This would get 7.0. I notice some paraphrasing from one of our models. Paraphrasing is fine, but make sure you never write a wholly memorised essay as that's a guaranteed Band score 0!  www.ieltsexchange.com |
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Post by vinutna on Dec 10, 2015 17:11:53 GMT
Hello Teacher Jill, Below is an essay based on obesity. I am not sure whether the addressed points are right or not. I guess essay did not address a completely. I request you to say what has to be written for this question? Question: Today's society provides people with various ways to loose weight, such as special diets or exercise regimes. Many people believe though that poor food and today's lifestyle be addressed first. What is your viewpoint of the situation?   |
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Post by vinutna on Dec 11, 2015 6:46:46 GMT
Hello Teacher Jill, Kindly assess it. Essay Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education. Why do people do this and would/ will you consider doing this yourself?   |
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