Post by princesampla on May 31, 2016 13:17:43 GMT
Myself Prince Sampla, I am sitting for IELTS General Training exam on 4th June. I am not very confident about my writing skills and need your opinion on the same. It would be very helpful for me, if you can comment on my writing style and suggest improvements to make it more effective. I need to score very high marks in the exam and thus I need to prepare thoroughly for it.
Question Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
The recent trends of globalisation and economic migration are resulting in exodus of rural population to urban areas. As, the land resources are limited, many people need to select between living in a house versus living in an apartment. The disadvantages of living in a house outweigh the advantages, when compared with apartment.
The key advantage of living in a house would be the easy access to the relatively peaceful environment. Another advantage would be the privacy which remains ensured, while living in a house. Also the ability to modify or redesign the structure based on your preferences is another significant advantage.
The key disadvantage would be the inability to share resources like swimming pool, gym and thus save the costs involved. Sharing these resources would reduce costs and the time spent in maintenance activities. Also, staying in the house devoid one of the opportunities to effectively connect with their neighbours. People living in apartments frequently get together on various social occasions. Thus, the celebration or happiness gets shared and bond between people becomes stronger.
Living in the house could be more beneficial if one wants to isolate himself from the environment or is looking for a very peaceful place while ensuring privacy. But in modern times, when the resources are already limited and living expenses are already high, living in apartment is a far more sensible decision.
Question Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
The recent trends of globalisation and economic migration are resulting in exodus of rural population to urban areas. As, the land resources are limited, many people need to select between living in a house versus living in an apartment. The disadvantages of living in a house outweigh the advantages, when compared with apartment.
The key advantage of living in a house would be the easy access to the relatively peaceful environment. Another advantage would be the privacy which remains ensured, while living in a house. Also the ability to modify or redesign the structure based on your preferences is another significant advantage.
The key disadvantage would be the inability to share resources like swimming pool, gym and thus save the costs involved. Sharing these resources would reduce costs and the time spent in maintenance activities. Also, staying in the house devoid one of the opportunities to effectively connect with their neighbours. People living in apartments frequently get together on various social occasions. Thus, the celebration or happiness gets shared and bond between people becomes stronger.
Living in the house could be more beneficial if one wants to isolate himself from the environment or is looking for a very peaceful place while ensuring privacy. But in modern times, when the resources are already limited and living expenses are already high, living in apartment is a far more sensible decision.
