Post by princesampla on May 31, 2016 13:16:50 GMT
Myself Prince Sampla, I am sitting for IELTS General Training exam on 4th June. I have submitted two posts in the forum, one under the Writing Task 1 category for Essay writing and this post for Letter writing.
I am not very confident about my writing skills and need your opinion on the same. It would be very helpful for me, if you can comment on my writing style and suggest improvements to make it more effective. I need to score very high marks in the exam and thus I need to prepare thoroughly for it.
Question You have recently started working in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter:
Explain why you changed job
Describe your new job
Tell him/her your other news.
Dear Peter,
I am writing this letter so as to inform you about my new job. I have joined Azus and have started working as Communications Manager in its Marketing division.
As you already know, I was not happy with my previous job. With time the work had become monotonous and the growth opportunities were also dismal. Two months back I requested my HR about a change in the role. But the HR did not took any action on my request. I started looking for opportunities with other companies in my area of interest and luckily I got this one.
My new job is entirely based on my expectations. Here, I have been given the authority to take decisions and I am working in the Communications department; you already know how much I aspired for, to get a job in this area.
Another good news is, I might need to travel to your country next month, on a work related visit. The visit will be of one week duration and I am looking forward to meet you then.
Waiting to hear from you soon.
With regards,
Prince Sampla.
I am not very confident about my writing skills and need your opinion on the same. It would be very helpful for me, if you can comment on my writing style and suggest improvements to make it more effective. I need to score very high marks in the exam and thus I need to prepare thoroughly for it.
Question You have recently started working in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter:
Explain why you changed job
Describe your new job
Tell him/her your other news.
Dear Peter,
I am writing this letter so as to inform you about my new job. I have joined Azus and have started working as Communications Manager in its Marketing division.
As you already know, I was not happy with my previous job. With time the work had become monotonous and the growth opportunities were also dismal. Two months back I requested my HR about a change in the role. But the HR did not took any action on my request. I started looking for opportunities with other companies in my area of interest and luckily I got this one.
My new job is entirely based on my expectations. Here, I have been given the authority to take decisions and I am working in the Communications department; you already know how much I aspired for, to get a job in this area.
Another good news is, I might need to travel to your country next month, on a work related visit. The visit will be of one week duration and I am looking forward to meet you then.
Waiting to hear from you soon.
With regards,
Prince Sampla.